Zechariah 9:11 in 8 translations
7 distinct wordings, grouped by what each translation is trying to do. Differences from the King James text are marked below.
Early modern English
Seventeenth-century wording and sentence shape. Familiar, rhythmic, and the version most quotations you have heard are taken from.
As for thee also, by the blood of thy covenant I have sent forth thy prisoners out of the pit wherein is no water.
1611 / 1769 · Public domain · The Authorised Version, revised to the 1769 Blayney text. Includes the Apocrypha as printed in 1611.
Literal, word-for-word
Follows Hebrew and Greek word order and grammar closely, even where the English becomes stiff. Useful for seeing what the underlying sentence is doing.
As for thee also, because of the blood of thy covenant I have set free thy prisoners from the pit wherein is no water.
1901 · Public domain · The American revision of the English Revised Version. Deliberately literal, and the base text behind several later translations.
As for thee also, by the blood of thy covenant, I will send forth thy prisoners out of the pit wherein is no water.
1890 · Public domain · John Nelson Darby's translation, made for close study rather than public reading. Often exposes grammatical detail other versions smooth over.
Also thou--by the blood of thy covenant, I have sent thy prisoners out of the pit, There is no water in it.
1898 · Public domain · The most extreme word-for-word rendering here, keeping Hebrew and Greek tense and word order at the cost of natural English.
Modern English
Contemporary vocabulary and punctuation, aiming for the sentence a present-day reader would write while staying close to the source.
As for you also, because of the blood of your covenant, I have set free your prisoners from the pit in which is no water.
2000s · Public domain · A modern-English update of the ASV. Reads close to contemporary speech while staying in the literal tradition. Includes the Apocrypha.
These 2 editions word this verse identically.
And you, too – because of your blood covenant, I have set free your prisoners from the waterless pit.
in progress · Public domain (CC0) · A modern open-licensed translation, still being completed. Some Old Testament books are not yet available.
Simplified English
Built from a deliberately small vocabulary so the sense stays reachable for new readers and non-native speakers. Trades nuance for clarity.
And as for you, because of the blood of your agreement, I have sent out your prisoners from the deep hole in which there is no water.
1949 · Public domain · Written with roughly a thousand basic English words plus a small Bible vocabulary. The plainest reading available here.
What changes between the King James and modern wording
The modern rendering is printed below with every word that differs from the King James text marked, so the actual divergence is visible rather than left for you to spot.
As for you also, because of the blood of your covenant I have set free your prisoners from the pit in which is no water.
Word-for-word swaps
- thee→you
- by→because
- thy→your
- thy→set
- of→from
- wherein→in
The verses either side
King James text. A comparison is easier to judge when you can see the sentence the verse sits inside.