Revelation 9:3 in 8 translations
7 distinct wordings, grouped by what each translation is trying to do. Differences from the King James text are marked below.
Early modern English
Seventeenth-century wording and sentence shape. Familiar, rhythmic, and the version most quotations you have heard are taken from.
And there came out of the smoke locusts upon the earth: and unto them was given power, as the scorpions of the earth have power.
1611 / 1769 · Public domain · The Authorised Version, revised to the 1769 Blayney text. Includes the Apocrypha as printed in 1611.
Literal, word-for-word
Follows Hebrew and Greek word order and grammar closely, even where the English becomes stiff. Useful for seeing what the underlying sentence is doing.
And out of the smoke came forth locusts upon the earth; and power was given them, as the scorpions of the earth have power.
1901 · Public domain · The American revision of the English Revised Version. Deliberately literal, and the base text behind several later translations.
And out of the smoke came forth locusts on the earth, and power was given to them as the scorpions of the earth have power;
1890 · Public domain · John Nelson Darby's translation, made for close study rather than public reading. Often exposes grammatical detail other versions smooth over.
And out of the smoke came forth locusts to the earth, and there was given to them authority, as scorpions of the earth have authority,
1898 · Public domain · The most extreme word-for-word rendering here, keeping Hebrew and Greek tense and word order at the cost of natural English.
Modern English
Contemporary vocabulary and punctuation, aiming for the sentence a present-day reader would write while staying close to the source.
Then out of the smoke came locusts on the earth, and power was given to them, as the scorpions of the earth have power.
2000s · Public domain · A modern-English update of the ASV. Reads close to contemporary speech while staying in the literal tradition. Includes the Apocrypha.
These 2 editions word this verse identically.
Out of the smoke locusts descended on the earth, and they received the same power as that possessed by scorpions.
in progress · Public domain (CC0) · A modern open-licensed translation, still being completed. Some Old Testament books are not yet available.
Simplified English
Built from a deliberately small vocabulary so the sense stays reachable for new readers and non-native speakers. Trades nuance for clarity.
And from the smoke locusts came out on the earth; and power was given them, like the power of scorpions.
1949 · Public domain · Written with roughly a thousand basic English words plus a small Bible vocabulary. The plainest reading available here.
What changes between the King James and modern wording
The modern rendering is printed below with every word that differs from the King James text marked, so the actual divergence is visible rather than left for you to spot.
Then out of the smoke came locusts on the earth: and power was given to them, as the scorpions of the earth have power.
Word-for-word swaps
- came→Then
- upon→on
- them→power
- power→to
The verses either side
King James text. A comparison is easier to judge when you can see the sentence the verse sits inside.