Psalms 58:9 in 8 translations
7 distinct wordings, grouped by what each translation is trying to do. Differences from the King James text are marked below.
Early modern English
Seventeenth-century wording and sentence shape. Familiar, rhythmic, and the version most quotations you have heard are taken from.
Before your pots can feel the thorns, he shall take them away as with a whirlwind, both living, and in wrath.
1611 / 1769 · Public domain · The Authorised Version, revised to the 1769 Blayney text. Includes the Apocrypha as printed in 1611.
Literal, word-for-word
Follows Hebrew and Greek word order and grammar closely, even where the English becomes stiff. Useful for seeing what the underlying sentence is doing.
Before your pots can feel the thorns, He will take them away with a whirlwind, the green and the burning alike.
1901 · Public domain · The American revision of the English Revised Version. Deliberately literal, and the base text behind several later translations.
Before your pots feel the thorns, green or burning, they shall be whirled away.
1890 · Public domain · John Nelson Darby's translation, made for close study rather than public reading. Often exposes grammatical detail other versions smooth over.
Before your pots discern the bramble, As well the raw as the heated He whirleth away.
1898 · Public domain · The most extreme word-for-word rendering here, keeping Hebrew and Greek tense and word order at the cost of natural English.
Modern English
Contemporary vocabulary and punctuation, aiming for the sentence a present-day reader would write while staying close to the source.
Before your pots can feel the heat of the thorns, he will sweep away the green and the burning alike.
2000s · Public domain · A modern-English update of the ASV. Reads close to contemporary speech while staying in the literal tradition. Includes the Apocrypha.
These 2 editions word this verse identically.
Faster than a thorn-fire heats your pots, he will come with his tempest and sweep them away.
in progress · Public domain (CC0) · A modern open-licensed translation, still being completed. Some Old Testament books are not yet available.
Simplified English
Built from a deliberately small vocabulary so the sense stays reachable for new readers and non-native speakers. Trades nuance for clarity.
Before they are conscious of it, let them be cut down like thorns; let a strong wind take them away like waste growth.
1949 · Public domain · Written with roughly a thousand basic English words plus a small Bible vocabulary. The plainest reading available here.
What changes between the King James and modern wording
The modern rendering is printed below with every word that differs from the King James text marked, so the actual divergence is visible rather than left for you to spot.
Before your pots can feel the heat of the thorns, he will sweep away the green and the burning alike.
Word-for-word swaps
- them→will
- living→the
- wrath→the
The verses either side
King James text. A comparison is easier to judge when you can see the sentence the verse sits inside.