2 Thessalonians 3:10 in 8 translations
8 distinct wordings, grouped by what each translation is trying to do. Differences from the King James text are marked below.
Early modern English
Seventeenth-century wording and sentence shape. Familiar, rhythmic, and the version most quotations you have heard are taken from.
For even when we were with you, this we commanded you, that if any would not work, neither should he eat.
1611 / 1769 · Public domain · The Authorised Version, revised to the 1769 Blayney text. Includes the Apocrypha as printed in 1611.
Literal, word-for-word
Follows Hebrew and Greek word order and grammar closely, even where the English becomes stiff. Useful for seeing what the underlying sentence is doing.
For even when we were with you, this we commanded you, If any will not work, neither let him eat.
1901 · Public domain · The American revision of the English Revised Version. Deliberately literal, and the base text behind several later translations.
For also when we were with you we enjoined you this, that if any man does not like to work, neither let him eat.
1890 · Public domain · John Nelson Darby's translation, made for close study rather than public reading. Often exposes grammatical detail other versions smooth over.
for even when we were with you, this we did command you, that if any one is not willing to work, neither let him eat,
1898 · Public domain · The most extreme word-for-word rendering here, keeping Hebrew and Greek tense and word order at the cost of natural English.
Modern English
Contemporary vocabulary and punctuation, aiming for the sentence a present-day reader would write while staying close to the source.
For even when we were with you, we commanded you this: “If anyone will not work, don’t let him eat.”
2000s · Public domain · A modern-English update of the ASV. Reads close to contemporary speech while staying in the literal tradition. Includes the Apocrypha.
Indeed, when we were with you, the rule we laid down was – ‘Whoever does not choose to work will not get to eat.’
in progress · Public domain (CC0) · A modern open-licensed translation, still being completed. Some Old Testament books are not yet available.
Indeed, when we were with you, the rule we laid down was – “Whoever does not choose to work will not get to eat.”
in progress · Public domain (CC0) · The Commonwealth spelling edition of the Open English Bible. Identical wording to the US edition apart from spelling.
Simplified English
Built from a deliberately small vocabulary so the sense stays reachable for new readers and non-native speakers. Trades nuance for clarity.
For even when we were with you we gave you orders, saying, If any man does no work, let him not have food.
1949 · Public domain · Written with roughly a thousand basic English words plus a small Bible vocabulary. The plainest reading available here.
What changes between the King James and modern wording
The modern rendering is printed below with every word that differs from the King James text marked, so the actual divergence is visible rather than left for you to spot.
For even when we were with you, we commanded you, this: if anyone will not work, don’t let him eat.
Word-for-word swaps
- that→this
- would→anyone
- he→don’t
The verses either side
King James text. A comparison is easier to judge when you can see the sentence the verse sits inside.